This article tells us that teenagers are now paying a lot of attention to their looks, with many using kohl, a black eyeliner. In my opinion, this is not beneficial to the society.
There are some benefits of this trend. Firstly, paying attention to looks will occupy them and reduce the chances of them creating trouble. Thus, the society will be a safer place to live in, and the low crime rates will attract more tourists and investors, boosting Singapore's economy. This trend also creates another similarity between men and women, thus making both sexes seem more equal. Presently, women are discriminated as inefficient, and they have less chances of getting promoted or hired. However, these teenagers will grow up to see women as more equal, and thus reducing the discrimination against women.
However, I feel that the consequences outweigh the benefits. In my opinion, teenagers, both boys and girls, should not waste their time on appearances, but instead, concentrate on their studies. With an increasing number of people using kohl, more people will get influenced and less will focus on their studies. Singapore’s economy and politics will be badly influenced as these teenagers will grow up to take over the workforce and govern the city. With focus on appearance, these teenagers will be less capable and efficient of bringing Singapore to success.
As a result of peer influence, more eyeliner, costing up to sixty dollars and finishing in about two months, will be bought. As most parents find this behaviour unacceptable, it will result in quarells and relationships will be strained. Furthermore, with expenditure on eyeliner, some might not be able to afford educational classes, resulting in them not being able to develop fully their potential.
Research done has showed that one cause of this behaviour is being influenced by the subculture Japanese Goth and emo-punk music. This shows us how culture can influence teenager behaviour. Thus, I believe it is necessary to develop teenagers’ analytical skills and also teach them about culture, thus enabling them to see the consequences of such a trend.
Another cause is the desire to look good. As mentioned by Kenneth Teng, “eyeliner helps to define your eyes”. Although it is human nature to desire good looks, I believe there should be a limit and using eyeliner is not encouraged at this age, because of its consequences. Schools should teach teenagers the importance of studying hard, which would change their attitude and priorities so that studying will become the highest priority, which will be beneficial to the society.
However, the things that are most beneficial to the society cannot be decided by me, as I do not see the entire situation, unlike the government which has the experience and maturity to consider all the different factors and decide on the most appropriate actions to take. Thus, this is my opinion on the article and I hope the government would take into account my views when deciding whether to take action.
There are some benefits of this trend. Firstly, paying attention to looks will occupy them and reduce the chances of them creating trouble. Thus, the society will be a safer place to live in, and the low crime rates will attract more tourists and investors, boosting Singapore's economy. This trend also creates another similarity between men and women, thus making both sexes seem more equal. Presently, women are discriminated as inefficient, and they have less chances of getting promoted or hired. However, these teenagers will grow up to see women as more equal, and thus reducing the discrimination against women.
However, I feel that the consequences outweigh the benefits. In my opinion, teenagers, both boys and girls, should not waste their time on appearances, but instead, concentrate on their studies. With an increasing number of people using kohl, more people will get influenced and less will focus on their studies. Singapore’s economy and politics will be badly influenced as these teenagers will grow up to take over the workforce and govern the city. With focus on appearance, these teenagers will be less capable and efficient of bringing Singapore to success.
As a result of peer influence, more eyeliner, costing up to sixty dollars and finishing in about two months, will be bought. As most parents find this behaviour unacceptable, it will result in quarells and relationships will be strained. Furthermore, with expenditure on eyeliner, some might not be able to afford educational classes, resulting in them not being able to develop fully their potential.
Research done has showed that one cause of this behaviour is being influenced by the subculture Japanese Goth and emo-punk music. This shows us how culture can influence teenager behaviour. Thus, I believe it is necessary to develop teenagers’ analytical skills and also teach them about culture, thus enabling them to see the consequences of such a trend.
Another cause is the desire to look good. As mentioned by Kenneth Teng, “eyeliner helps to define your eyes”. Although it is human nature to desire good looks, I believe there should be a limit and using eyeliner is not encouraged at this age, because of its consequences. Schools should teach teenagers the importance of studying hard, which would change their attitude and priorities so that studying will become the highest priority, which will be beneficial to the society.
However, the things that are most beneficial to the society cannot be decided by me, as I do not see the entire situation, unlike the government which has the experience and maturity to consider all the different factors and decide on the most appropriate actions to take. Thus, this is my opinion on the article and I hope the government would take into account my views when deciding whether to take action.
